Deep, dark and dirtay.
Once again, I find myself not having much to blog about, so I'm going to have to recite- or is that cybercite?- one of my poems. I wrote this one a week ago...
Stuck in a hole of muddy remnants,
Destruction seeps to join the rancid concoction.
As the pungency sherberts and gobs,
it spills onto the pristine surface.
The cotton dreads lick up the sludge,
a sweet smoke wafts and weaves through the nasal disaster.
Stains locked in,
to eternally taunt.
Ghost-like odors,
hang in limbo.
By the time the note is read;
the drifting senses leave no trail.
*disappears into the night*
4 Comments:
for someone this sweet and funny and happy.... the poem is depressing Sas!
Shrutz
5:53 AM
Wat can I say Shrutz, I've got underlying demons- just like many happy people. It seems to creep out every now and then... :P
Thanks for reading :D
9:37 AM
my kinda lines...
cool
9:59 AM
Thanks a whole lotta flower petals Poopah! I do read the dictionary occasionally :S I understand that u have more important things :P like exams grrrr. When u come back well celebrate :D
xoxoxox
5:22 PM
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